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What's with the lack of pre-loaders and excessive amount of looped videos on NG right now. There is a free pre-loader you can download from Newgrounds and I suggest you just throw that in front of your video before you submit.

A lot of users like myself dislike that looped animations as we have to right click and stop the video (just seems a bit obnoxious to me) and in the end I deduct points for that.

Also, I noticed you used DBZ effects, should somewhere state that).
Other than that, it was sort of funny I guess... The animation itself wasn't terrible although I wish the characters were better designed.

Regardless, 3/5 stars for this.

Thanks,
Bradley

JukinS responds:

thank you! this will help me to improve!! I've some problems with ng loaders, so sorry about that

Should have added a pre-loader, but the animation is good, the sound effects are good and you actually credited so that gives you automatic "brownie points" with me. Yeah, next time just add a pre-loader, and maybe make a bit longer than 20 second video (if it was even that long, lol).

3/5 stars for this.

Thanks,
Bradley

fionploy5000 responds:

Ouch! my All Comments Too Views Thanks you :D

No sound, no music, no pre-loader, poorly drawn, poorly animated, and very, very boring to watch.
Next time you should add a pre-loader, maybe some music, and robotic sound effects to go along with his movements, and maybe then (with some more dance moves other than just the one continued loop) you will make a movie that will be accepted.

Also the grey scale made this seem "dark" when he's dancing?
Just doesn't suit the "video" at all.

Back to the drawing board my friend with what I suggested, and I think you will have better luck!

Thanks,
Bradley

ZaneLittle responds:

There is a reason that there is no sound, no preloader, and the quick drawings. First of all, if you were to have read the description, this was an entry for the "Sarcastic Robotic Collab". So sound was not necessary as music would have been playing in the background. A preloader would have been useless, as the animation is quite short and takes almost no time to load in the first place. And the quick drawings, those were because I had a very quick deadline to get this out. Yet I still missed it. Anyways, thanks for your input, but read the description next time. ;)

This is garbage, if this is allowed it I will honestly be very upset with NG community. No way you just typed out a story and expect everyone to follow along reading it at the pace in which you set for them. Sheer laziness to not add a scroll bar and buttons to advance and go to previous pages.

Not everyone can read at that pace (I can myself) but I am sure others may not be able to.
It reminds me of a crappy YouTube video where they give you 4 seconds to read an entire paragraph and you're just on the last sentence before it fades away and nothing is more annoying than that.

Why not ANIMATE the story, not just type it. If you're going to type out a story there is a Writers Group in the forums. I did notice "Episode#39" & I will tell you right now, everyday if I have to I will vote zero on this series until it is off NG.

This was terrible and a sad excuse for an "animation".

Thanks,
Bradley

stewardhklarlover responds:

Ouch! That's gonna leave a mark. Welp, as long as it's not the mark of the beast I'll manage.

The animation is poor, the story was quite boring. The only okay aspect to this was the sound effects, and music.

Please take more time with your art, don't just submit anything to the portal (as you will find out) it may be blammed off. I gotta be honest, I saw erasing errors during your animation and nothing bothers me more than that.

Please re-work this, or ask for help next time. This honestly is trash, although if it is your first animation I can see it being somewhat "okay". In my opinion just not NG worthy.

Thanks,
Bradley

Keetz responds:

Even though some people will call that "hate" I have to thank you for that. No one told me this and I probably wouldn't have changed it ever. Thank you!

-Keetz

This was awesome, well written.

kdanielss responds:

Look, I didn't write this. Nor did I voice this.
If you want to compliment me, praise the animation or the adaptation.

Funny, the "easter egg" was too easy to find, you never disabled "tab" so it kind of gives it away.

WooleyWorld responds:

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I thought it was creepy although it looked real sketchy, example the cars headlights... one was ahead of the other one, which would make no sense. I like that you used actual hand drawings though, that was a nice touch, gave it a creepy look.

descom responds:

That the point.
To be creepy.

Alright Flash

I can see potential here with some practice. You should add voice actors to do the voices of your characters, it would be a little nicer. Also, try to improve on your drawing skills. Not sure if you are using the brush tool, but the pen tool seems to work a little better for me (ensures a smooth line).

Like I said though, it's an alright flash & I can see some potential here, so a 6/10 should do you over until you practice a little more, good luck!

Cal.

Gamps responds:

O.o wow thx XDD i will practice more

Funny

Funny animation here... The idea was pretty decent, and gross which was humoring. I would have hated to have been the black guy in the animation. I enjoyed the sounds, they were well put into the animation, the animation itself had decent graphics, and was smooth.

Excellent flash here, great work!

Cal.

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