Wasn't bad need a little work on the whole art portion of it, other than that it was pretty great. Cool story, I liked. Thanks!
This is absolutely phenomenal, the animation, the voice acting, the story was great. I loved this flash so much. Thank you for the great watch, it truly is amazing!
What's with the lack of pre-loaders and excessive amount of looped videos on NG right now. There is a free pre-loader you can download from Newgrounds and I suggest you just throw that in front of your video before you submit.
A lot of users like myself dislike that looped animations as we have to right click and stop the video (just seems a bit obnoxious to me) and in the end I deduct points for that.
Also, I noticed you used DBZ effects, should somewhere state that).
Other than that, it was sort of funny I guess... The animation itself wasn't terrible although I wish the characters were better designed.
Regardless, 3/5 stars for this.
thank you! this will help me to improve!! I've some problems with ng loaders, so sorry about that
Should have added a pre-loader, but the animation is good, the sound effects are good and you actually credited so that gives you automatic "brownie points" with me. Yeah, next time just add a pre-loader, and maybe make a bit longer than 20 second video (if it was even that long, lol).
3/5 stars for this.
Ouch! my All Comments Too Views Thanks you :D
This looks like a class project or something. Few things, the animation is stiff, the art was pretty well done. The video it'self was boring as every (like an old childrends book) which isn't very tasteful for a site like Newgrounds.com
I also noticed that the two "twin guys" and the guy in the blue shirt had the exact same animation to them (stiffly moving arms to sides). Also the "Narrator" if you want to call him that had the same animation each new frame, so it was basically a matter of flipping the images, and having the exact same movie-clip pasted onto a different background.
Was a bore, but since the art was well done, I will give it a 3/5.
Um, this was sort of weird... hahaha. I got to be honest that the animation is kind of crappy. But it was sorta funny, and I could look past the bad animation to watch the rest of the video. For that I will give you two stars. Again though you are another animator that upsets me. When you use someone else's music you should credit that musician (there's a spot for it) and a link for users to buy if they like, or download.
Credit your audio, as I know you did not create this soundtrack.
I'm giving 2/5 stars because I actually sat and watched. It's a 50/50 shot of getting in in my opinion.
I gotta be honest, the video sucked to watch... bored the be-jebus out of me. (yes i just made that word/spelling up). The only thing that kept me watching was the soundtrack you had (which by the way I see ZERO credit to the author of the music unless it is the title of this video) regardless way to confusing.
I also very much dislike "furries" it's creepy and uncalled for in all honesty. As anonymous said "It's mainly autistic kids that like to dress up and are sexually aroused by animals".
That's quite disturbing and needs to be checked out. The final image IS good though on the bright side, and that soundtrack is incredible.
Please give the author to music the credit he/she deserves as I would like to purchase that song!
I would give you one star for the music and overall finished product but since you were ignorant enough to not credit the musician, I will show ignorance with ignorance and give you 1/2 star.
No sound, no music, no pre-loader, poorly drawn, poorly animated, and very, very boring to watch.
Next time you should add a pre-loader, maybe some music, and robotic sound effects to go along with his movements, and maybe then (with some more dance moves other than just the one continued loop) you will make a movie that will be accepted.
Also the grey scale made this seem "dark" when he's dancing?
Just doesn't suit the "video" at all.
Back to the drawing board my friend with what I suggested, and I think you will have better luck!
There is a reason that there is no sound, no preloader, and the quick drawings. First of all, if you were to have read the description, this was an entry for the "Sarcastic Robotic Collab". So sound was not necessary as music would have been playing in the background. A preloader would have been useless, as the animation is quite short and takes almost no time to load in the first place. And the quick drawings, those were because I had a very quick deadline to get this out. Yet I still missed it. Anyways, thanks for your input, but read the description next time. ;)
This is garbage, if this is allowed it I will honestly be very upset with NG community. No way you just typed out a story and expect everyone to follow along reading it at the pace in which you set for them. Sheer laziness to not add a scroll bar and buttons to advance and go to previous pages.
Not everyone can read at that pace (I can myself) but I am sure others may not be able to.
It reminds me of a crappy YouTube video where they give you 4 seconds to read an entire paragraph and you're just on the last sentence before it fades away and nothing is more annoying than that.
Why not ANIMATE the story, not just type it. If you're going to type out a story there is a Writers Group in the forums. I did notice "Episode#39" & I will tell you right now, everyday if I have to I will vote zero on this series until it is off NG.
This was terrible and a sad excuse for an "animation".
Ouch! That's gonna leave a mark. Welp, as long as it's not the mark of the beast I'll manage.
The animation is poor, the story was quite boring. The only okay aspect to this was the sound effects, and music.
Please take more time with your art, don't just submit anything to the portal (as you will find out) it may be blammed off. I gotta be honest, I saw erasing errors during your animation and nothing bothers me more than that.
Please re-work this, or ask for help next time. This honestly is trash, although if it is your first animation I can see it being somewhat "okay". In my opinion just not NG worthy.
Even though some people will call that "hate" I have to thank you for that. No one told me this and I probably wouldn't have changed it ever. Thank you!
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