CreateAndDestroy's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Vete a la Versh 11]

Funny

Was a funny flash, thankful that you added subtitles or else I would have blammed if for the fact that it is in Spanish.

Still, decent graphics although the drawing could be a little better still.
The backgrounds looked good.

Animation was nice and smooth, which was good. Overall this is a great flash!

Cal.

Darkar responds:

Thanks. :)

[Intro to My Life]

Pretty Well Done

Not bad... everything was really sketchy which was alright because I enjoy sketchy art like that. I liked the intro song, then the fact that you put Moonlight into the flash made everything so much better.

Had a dark/noir vibe to it at the same time, which could attract a ton of users. Great work for a first, cannot wait to see more.

In order to improve, take some more time with the artistic side of it.

Cal.

Prestokey responds:

Thank you very much, im working hard to get better.

[Headlights On Dark Roads]

Decent Work!

The characters looked sort of like a 4 year old drew them, not to mention their teeth sort of gave me the creeps. The music is great, as Snow Patrol is one of my favourite bands.

The animation was decent, so that's always a bonus. Great work on doing the lip syncing - almost exact. I liked the close up on the eye, it looked great.

Also nice with the pure blue guys, with a little bit of colour. Made a visual impact, which I enjoyed.

Decent work!

Cal.

Insanimation responds:

Thanks for the review. I must admit, cartoon characters have never been my strong point. Snow Patrol truly are a great band, although once you spend 4 days listening to the same song over and over again in strange spurts, it gets a bit annoying. :D

[Resident Shittits 5]

Great!

I get the feeling that this style of art is just that... your style. So I am not going to review based on your art style. I will say though, that the characters could be a little smoother, and you would find that the flash would look 100x more clear and professional.

The voice acting was decent, and the animation was pretty well done. Not much of a plot, though... try adding a decent storyline. You have potential to make a great flash, all you need is to put a little more time into it, and you could be the next big thing.

Keep working away at it, I have high hopes!

Cal.

RhysMus responds:

As i said it was intentionally to be rusehd and to look shitty as. but oh well, thanks anyways.

[Resident Hall Evil]

Hmmm

Once again, really not much "effort" put into this flash. I mean, you took a video recorder, and taped yourself doing stupid stuff in your dorm room. I guess it was sort of funny, so it's not all bad. Although I prefer to see flash that are hand-drawn and take a little more time to make.

Regardless, it's decent. You get bonus for having a Boondock Saints poster in your dorm room though, that's just wicked!

Cal.

Fro responds:

yea

[Generic Sprite Flash: 2]

Good Work

Not really a sprite fan, although this flash was decent.
It was funny, and had good music to go along with it. Overall I enjoyed this flash, which is saying a lot, because as I said I hate sprites.

It was good and a bonus for you that you used Link from Zelda, considering that is one of my favourite games of all time.

The movie brought back some good memory's (and some bad ones, of how badly I sucked at some parts).

Good work, liked the flash and wouldn't mind seeing more!

Cal.

Fro responds:

Thanks! Whenever I have time I'll work on another one!

[Madness Assasination: KT]

Well Done

I hate Madness (originals) but this spin-off was pretty decent. I liked how you added more detail to the characters, and used an actual part of American History as your "template idea" for this flash.

Cal.

C-Doodlez-Man responds:

thanks thanks

[Paper flow]

Pretty Good

I enjoyed the music, the animation was nice and elegant. A bit rough and slow at times, but still very nice. I liked how you used the resource of that paper background. It's a different approach but a very good one.

Zyphonee responds:

:DD

[The Lonely Castle Crasher]

Took Me By Surprise

Cute, the narration was good. I liked some of the lines in it too. The animation might have been very simple but it was still a very well executed animation, and the ending made up for it all. I love Castle Crashers, I find them so adorable, I am glad to see that someone else could picture these little guys with such a young, shy, timid voice/personality.

Well done!

Cal

LAVAGASM responds:

It took you by surprise like some semen in your eyes that's amore.

[Madness Juxtaposition 2]

Decent Short

This was a pretty decent short, the animation was sort of sketchy though, and the characters could have been drawn a little better I think. The music suited the short very well, I enjoyed it overall a few things.

1. You should have had Voice Actors who could have done the rest of the Vox because you had vocals at the start, then the rest of the short it was text based.

2. Animation needs to be smoother, not sure what FPS rate you use, but possibly try speeding it up.

3. Spend more time on the character design. It looks like you used the brush tool, when I think the line & pen tool would have worked a whole lot easier for you, to give you smooth lines.

Overall, good short & thanks for the entertainment I will be around next madness day to see how this plays out.

Cal

CrispyBrain responds:

Thanks for the constructive suggestion. I really do love reviews like this and it's too far and few that you see it on Newgrounds.

My FPS was locked at 24, maybe I should up it a bit, but that was industry standard, this was also my first attempts at using a tablet directly in to Flash.

I'll take in to consideration using the pen tool instead of the brush, it was an experiemntal animation to be sure. Again thanks for the suggestions.