Wasn't bad need a little work on the whole art portion of it, other than that it was pretty great. Cool story, I liked. Thanks!
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Wasn't bad need a little work on the whole art portion of it, other than that it was pretty great. Cool story, I liked. Thanks!
This is absolutely phenomenal, the animation, the voice acting, the story was great. I loved this flash so much. Thank you for the great watch, it truly is amazing!
5/5
What's with the lack of pre-loaders and excessive amount of looped videos on NG right now. There is a free pre-loader you can download from Newgrounds and I suggest you just throw that in front of your video before you submit.
A lot of users like myself dislike that looped animations as we have to right click and stop the video (just seems a bit obnoxious to me) and in the end I deduct points for that.
Also, I noticed you used DBZ effects, should somewhere state that).
Other than that, it was sort of funny I guess... The animation itself wasn't terrible although I wish the characters were better designed.
Regardless, 3/5 stars for this.
Thanks,
Bradley
thank you! this will help me to improve!! I've some problems with ng loaders, so sorry about that
Not too bad, sort of hard, the art was a bit crappy and the enemies reminded me of Koffing from Pokemon. Other than the character design and the facts he's constantly shooting the weapon and it's not controlled, I will give it 3/5 stars.
Thanks,
Bradley
What is the purpose of this?
If it actually typed and allowed you to DO something I would understand uploading it. Here's a suggestion though. O,K,L is obnoxious as hell. Why not use classic W,A,S,D & Arrow Keys or NumPad 8,4,2,6?
That way it would be a whole lot easier to control the hands, and the typing at the same time.
The coding isn't terrible though I just wish it DID something. I'll give it 2/5 stars.
Thanks,
Bradley
This is pretty good. I liked it a lot sounds almost better than the original. Thanks for this!
Incredible voice, cute song, I really liked this. :) Sounds awesome.
Forgott the muffins.
Legolas meets Rambo, great idea!
I really liked this, the top though looks like it is missing something, could just be me... Idk I am a beginner and don't do much illustrations via computer. So, yeah.
Fantastic!
Yet again, you manage to blow me away. Everything is great, the proportions, the shading, and overall just final product looks great. This would make a great character for any flash movie/game. You should do walking motions, and animation motion storyboards, and see if users would like to feature your characters in their movies. Another 10/10
Thanks! :D I'm probably getting flash soon, so I'll be able to make videos and stuff, if it's not too complicated. :J
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