Pretty Well Done
Not bad... everything was really sketchy which was alright because I enjoy sketchy art like that. I liked the intro song, then the fact that you put Moonlight into the flash made everything so much better.
Had a dark/noir vibe to it at the same time, which could attract a ton of users. Great work for a first, cannot wait to see more.
In order to improve, take some more time with the artistic side of it.
Cal.
Thank you very much, im working hard to get better.
You Are Right
The flash itself just sucks, but the music is amazing. Still I think you should have left the Audio and just submitted it to the Audio Portal and that is that.
Whatever though, 8/10 because it's really not that bad & the music fits a fat man walking cycle.
Cal.
Gorgeous and Creepy
Great video, I loved the animations which were all smooth. The character design was perfect, and the entire setup or this movie is A++. Great artistic work, there were colours which were chosen perfectly.
Backgrounds were well done also.
Wicked flash, great theme for Halloween. Job well done!
Cal.
Great Work
The story was well done.
The animation was perfect, and the art style was great. Reminded me a lot like Xombie. Which is a great similarity.
Good work on music, and lip syncing. Great flash, not much room for improvement other then to make it a bit longer next time.
Also, was sort of pissed that the reason of her being in the woods was for "Dairy Queen". Sort of funny, just not funny enough...
Great work though regardless!
Cal.
Another one...
I mean the Lady Gaga flash was alright, but again? There is no work being put into these collabs, there is hardly any animations but dancing or walking cycles... it just seems "lazy". You guys need to work more on your flash, and I am sure more people would like it. How it racked a score of 4.04 is obvious, everyone voted on their own flash.
Come on guys, do something great... stop with the collabs that obviously are not taking you very long, yet racking up your flash submission #'s. I mean, it's not like the amount of flash you have makes you famous or anything.
Cal.
Great!
I get the feeling that this style of art is just that... your style. So I am not going to review based on your art style. I will say though, that the characters could be a little smoother, and you would find that the flash would look 100x more clear and professional.
The voice acting was decent, and the animation was pretty well done. Not much of a plot, though... try adding a decent storyline. You have potential to make a great flash, all you need is to put a little more time into it, and you could be the next big thing.
Keep working away at it, I have high hopes!
Cal.
As i said it was intentionally to be rusehd and to look shitty as. but oh well, thanks anyways.
Great Work!
Great sound, Great Art & Animation!
The characters were well drawn, the animation was so smooth it looked professional. Not to mention the sound (of the characters and the background music, and sound effects) were all perfect.
The only thing I would suggest is, putting more detail into your backgrounds. Other then that, great work!
:D
Cal.
Age 35, Male
Ontario, Canada
Joined on 12/15/03
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