Pretty Well Done
Not bad... everything was really sketchy which was alright because I enjoy sketchy art like that. I liked the intro song, then the fact that you put Moonlight into the flash made everything so much better.
Had a dark/noir vibe to it at the same time, which could attract a ton of users. Great work for a first, cannot wait to see more.
In order to improve, take some more time with the artistic side of it.
Cal.
Thank you very much, im working hard to get better.
You Are Right
The flash itself just sucks, but the music is amazing. Still I think you should have left the Audio and just submitted it to the Audio Portal and that is that.
Whatever though, 8/10 because it's really not that bad & the music fits a fat man walking cycle.
Cal.
Gorgeous and Creepy
Great video, I loved the animations which were all smooth. The character design was perfect, and the entire setup or this movie is A++. Great artistic work, there were colours which were chosen perfectly.
Backgrounds were well done also.
Wicked flash, great theme for Halloween. Job well done!
Cal.
Great Work
The story was well done.
The animation was perfect, and the art style was great. Reminded me a lot like Xombie. Which is a great similarity.
Good work on music, and lip syncing. Great flash, not much room for improvement other then to make it a bit longer next time.
Also, was sort of pissed that the reason of her being in the woods was for "Dairy Queen". Sort of funny, just not funny enough...
Great work though regardless!
Cal.
Another one...
I mean the Lady Gaga flash was alright, but again? There is no work being put into these collabs, there is hardly any animations but dancing or walking cycles... it just seems "lazy". You guys need to work more on your flash, and I am sure more people would like it. How it racked a score of 4.04 is obvious, everyone voted on their own flash.
Come on guys, do something great... stop with the collabs that obviously are not taking you very long, yet racking up your flash submission #'s. I mean, it's not like the amount of flash you have makes you famous or anything.
Cal.
It's Alright
Some of the art, sucked. Some of the animations, sucked. Since it's a collaboration though, it's not fair to bring down the other authors. The music choice was.... strange. I never thought I would see a flash with Lady Gaga in it, but I did.
Catchy still, and pretty decent. passed judgment so users liked this submission.
I think there should have been more animation rather then just dancing, like a party or something crazy. There is so much more you could do with this song....
You all need to open your imaginations as artists and create some crazy stuff!
Have fun, go wild, make chances... what am I saying?
Just listen to Mrs. Frizzle!
Cal.
Decent Work!
The characters looked sort of like a 4 year old drew them, not to mention their teeth sort of gave me the creeps. The music is great, as Snow Patrol is one of my favourite bands.
The animation was decent, so that's always a bonus. Great work on doing the lip syncing - almost exact. I liked the close up on the eye, it looked great.
Also nice with the pure blue guys, with a little bit of colour. Made a visual impact, which I enjoyed.
Decent work!
Cal.
Thanks for the review. I must admit, cartoon characters have never been my strong point. Snow Patrol truly are a great band, although once you spend 4 days listening to the same song over and over again in strange spurts, it gets a bit annoying. :D
Great!
I get the feeling that this style of art is just that... your style. So I am not going to review based on your art style. I will say though, that the characters could be a little smoother, and you would find that the flash would look 100x more clear and professional.
The voice acting was decent, and the animation was pretty well done. Not much of a plot, though... try adding a decent storyline. You have potential to make a great flash, all you need is to put a little more time into it, and you could be the next big thing.
Keep working away at it, I have high hopes!
Cal.
As i said it was intentionally to be rusehd and to look shitty as. but oh well, thanks anyways.
Great Work!
Great sound, Great Art & Animation!
The characters were well drawn, the animation was so smooth it looked professional. Not to mention the sound (of the characters and the background music, and sound effects) were all perfect.
The only thing I would suggest is, putting more detail into your backgrounds. Other then that, great work!
:D
Cal.
Sad, Although Needed.
Simple, and stupid, although I agree this is needed. So surprised by the amount of users who choose not to use the search bar, and have their topic locked or deleted within minutes because of it, then they feel the need to complain.
Decent flash, good choice of music, and since it's a helpful flash, it's a must stay.
Good idea in helping out the noobs of the site, thanks!
Cal.
Age 34, Male
Ontario, Canada
Joined on 12/15/03
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